Notes from an Accidental Band Geek by Erin Dionne
Elsie Wyatt wants to be an orchestra superstar, like her dad and grandfather. The first step? Get into a super-selective summer music camp.
But in order to qualify, Elsie must "expand her musical horizons" by joining her school's marching band. Not only does this mean wearing a plumed hat and polyester pants, but it also means she can't play her own instrument, can't sit down, and can't seem to say the right thing to anyone
... let alone Jake, the cute trumpet player she meets on the first day. Plus, everything she does seems to cause a diaster. Surviving marching band is going to be way harder than Elsie thought!
First Thoughts: I have read Erin Dionne's other works, and they are very similiar to this story. I was like, "Okay, this author has written 2 books. Surely she had to grow." Right?
Plot:
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The plot in the story doesn't really match the written synopsis on the jacket. I was expecting something different. I was expecting a story that I could get my nod of approval. I was expecting a realistic high school. A realistic heroine. A realistic everything that Erin Dionne has failed to do in her previous novels. Unfortunately, I was sadly mistaken.
A girl with [insert-talent-here] has to go to a regular high school and do something so degrading that she hates... the rest will be a spoiler, but I'm sure you have heard the story before.
Granted, there were a few 'twists'. A few very very very MINOR twists. I mean, really? Aren't twists supposed to change the entire course of the story? And the 'growth' of Elsie isn't realistically portrayed. She really had a change of heart overnight.
And the antagonistical dad... I felt like she just threw him in. If someone is going to be an antagonist of the story, he/she should be put major obstacles, not giving disciplines to someone who truly deserves it.
Wait, isn't that for the characters? Oh well. I needed to get that off my chest.
Characters:
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The characters in this book can only be described as effervescent... and stereotypical.
The stereotypical cocky 'almost-famous' heroine, an emo guy (named PUNK, what is this?), a cute boy who is toooooo sweet for words and a boy who is obsessed with some type of geeky phenomenon.
And the other characters are out of the ordinary... but everyone is just too happy. Especially these days, everything isn't solved by a hug anymore. Granted, it doesn't have to be deep and dark about depression and stuff. But every character has a story. So those story need to be portrayed somehow.
Another problem I have with this (and other books in YA) why is the daughter allowed to stomp up the stairs and slam the door and not face any consequences? Where are the responsible authority figures who will show the child who's boss? And why are the disciplinary parents to someone who needs it portrayed as ABUSIVE? Come on!
Writing Style:
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I am so-so with Dionne's writing. There were some very imagery sentences, but the rest of the book was generic. Ordinary. And THERE WAS NO DIALECT, NOR WAS IT ORIGINAL.
Now, I know you are thinking, there was no dialect? No one talked?
I mean, there was dialogue. But there was no dialect. Meaning no one talked like real and actual teenagers. Especially in high school. There are cuss-words and a lot of crude references in high school. This is way too clean. Making it too happy. And too generic.
Other:
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So the cover is great. That must have been a siren call for me. I thought the french horn symbolized something... when, in truth, it symbolized nothing.
There was also no setting. I had no idea where this story had taken place in anywhere else beside a town with a school in Boston, using Context Clues.
Nothing else to really discuss here.
Genre: Contemporary fiction, humor
Pages: 280 (+Acknowledgements, 282)
Age Group: 9-12
Overall:
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An okay read. Depending on the subject, I doubt I will continue to read Erin Dionne's works.
Okay, that was my review. It took me a long time to write -_- But it's the first! It's a milestone!
Jia :)